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Swingers Episode 1 Swingers Episode 1

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Meh~

It was pretty original, I'll give you that. But original doesn't always mean good. I like your concepts and environment, but it's missing a lot of pieces.
Overall the whole thing was pretty boring, not much happened. Your voice acting leaves a LOT to be desired. Yes, a better microphone would help, but the acting itself was also very stale.
There's some potential here, but I'd say it needs more of an overhaul than a sequel.


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girl animation tryout girl animation tryout

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Couple issues.

If something isn't in motion, you shouldn't redraw it. It makes things look choppy. If you want this as a stylistic effect, you should prepare yourself for a TON of drawing.
Also, it looks to me like her head is getting consistently smaller through the video.


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flashspazzes007 responds:

ok.im still a beginner but i cant wait to do more.


Fudda (Fudda Pt. 1) Fudda (Fudda Pt. 1)

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Good writing, bad acting.

The voice acting is reaaaally holding this movie back. They all sound robotic and lifeless. The concept is pretty funny, but I couldn't get into it. And clearly, neither could you.

Just work on that.


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Aqlex responds:

I'm glad you liked the writing, at least. The voice acting of the teacher was actually purposefully meant to be somewhat robotic, though it wasn't me voicing it. I DID voice the other characters though, and I have been working on my voiceacting ever since! I think I've improved... hopefully? Check out some of my newer stuff and let me know what you think.

Thanks for the review, by the way.